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Drinker, Smoker, Cutter, LiAR!
Contributed by
midnight_writer
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Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 03:12:20 PM in AEST
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Drinker, Smoker, Cutter, LiAR!
~*~
She drinks,
When her heart has been broken.
She smokes,
Because she "needs to relax".
She cuts,
When she cries.
And she lies...
About it all.
She lies,
When she cuts.
She smokes, when he's there.
She drinks, and heals her pain.
She cuts at home,
Alone in pain.
Drinks within safe surroundings,
And lies to hide the smoke.
You've been given your choice girl -
Give it all up,
Start thinking...
Or forever, your gone.
Stop drowning in the intoxication of alcohol.
Stop suffocating in smoke.
Stop bleeding yourself to death.
Finally, stop your lying, the biggest fault of them all.
Copyright ©
midnight_writer
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2006-11-04 15:12:20]
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Re: Drinker, Smoker, Cutter, LiAR!
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 04:40:07 PM AEST
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Great advice....Excellent piece
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Re: Drinker, Smoker, Cutter, LiAR!
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 07:54:35 PM AEST
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| your tone came off quite well. you might be able to get to your friend sooner or later, or she might get another problem ::shrugs:: i think adding a rhyme at the end would have accentuated your point more by bringing added focus to it. also it would have been more powerful and hardhitting. |
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Re: Drinker, Smoker, Cutter, LiAR!
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 09:27:54 PM AEST
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Geez, we know the same chick. LOL The girl I knew had multiple personality disorder. She lied constantly, but lied about lying. She was freakish with how much lying she could do. I know another lady with similar mental problems. She told folks for two years she was pregnant. WTF Sometimes, if these folks refuse help, then you just let go. I felt sorry for the girl I once knew, it turned into a great dislike, though. I had to keep my distance from her. Cut her away. Not giving any advice just saying, let go. Find new friends. Friends like that, who needs enemies....right?
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Drinker, Smoker, Cutter, LiAR!
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 02:54:05 AM AEST
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| You should show her this poem, it may make her realize how much you care its sad as she must be so unhappy.. xxx |
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