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When You Walk On By
Contributed by
The_Unknown
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Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 09:48:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Don't forget to say hi
as you walk on by
you never look at me in the eyes
are you so ashamed?
don't you ever ask?
why can't you just say those words
why can you keep going
while I'm falling apart
I know its been a while
sense we've talked
I see you every day
its like you're okay
you're okay with me
falling apart
don't forget to say hi
as you walk on by
never say bye
when you glance at me
and walk away
you don't seem to care
when you see me cry
as tears stream down
you just walk away
puzzles are your life
we fit so perfectly together
but riddles is your game
so maybe there was a gap
still it felt so real
we've both moved on sense then
I still see you though
it brings back memories
of what we used to be
as you walk on by
you never say hi
and forget to say bye
still makes me cry
-:-Remember to say hi-:-
-:-Remember to say bye-:-
-:-With all your <3 -:-
.::ILOVEYOU::.
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The_Unknown
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2006-11-04 21:48:19]
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Re: When You Walk On By
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by emystar on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 10:10:47 PM AEST
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Sad but beautifully said.
Some exses are just tottaly cold. Don't let him get to u.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: When You Walk On By
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by wizard on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 11:59:29 PM AEST
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very sad...you're probably better off without him anyway, he doesnt seem to have very good qualities...judging by this poem at least...
nicley done,
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Re: When You Walk On By
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by silver_crested_shadow on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 11:28:00 AM AEST
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| its sad, and beautifully laid out, i like it, and it had meaning and at the same time tells people to think about the ones we are around not just ourselves. good write |
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Re: When You Walk On By
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by JoeyTrib1550 on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 05:53:56 AM AEST
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Great as always!
I love all of your poems
always filled with so much emotions which everyone can relate to
With much love and regret, for they can't be seperated,
Marc |
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