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Happy Birthday
Contributed by
Exodus
on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 05:36:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Things seem so simple
Music playing, pretty girls
Drinking, toasting to a birthday
Its the best birthday in the world
I think there is something secret
And I see no reason to enter tension
My friend Jim warms my stomach
No need to scream intervention
The bar is marble
The floor is cloud
I smile as I feel the rush of the music
They whisper something funny, but its much too loud
Happy birthday
And we're driving through the cold
Screeching tires screaming more
Light another cigarette because the feeling never gets old
Copyright ©
Exodus
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2006-11-05 17:36:36]
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Re: Happy Birthday
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by PoetryWriter11 on
Sunday, 28th June 2009 @ 03:15:40 AM AEST
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| I thought this poem was kinda unexpected because you tell the poem as an older version of a birthday.Some people might think its a little odd.Anyway you did a good job. =) |
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