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My New Life
Contributed by
imalwayzmissinu
on
Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 04:00:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Why do you do this
just leave me alone
I showed you all the love I could
and ignorance is all you've shown
I tried to make you understand
I truely cared about you
but after 11 months
hurt me is all you could do
I thought you were different
But you changed really fast
I remember you as you were at first
I tried to make it last
I gave you a thousand chances
To show me that you care
but when i truely need you
you were never there
you hurt me every chance you could
you tore apart my heart
thank god i finally realized
I had to do my part
I finally said goodbye
and it was for the best
I started my life before you
and now i can finish the rest
Copyright ©
imalwayzmissinu
... [
2006-11-06 04:00:13]
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Re: My New Life
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by Chamaron on
Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 09:50:49 PM AEST
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| Very good flow. Sometimes it's hard to let go when you think you can give them just one more chance or one more try, but I'm glad you ended it before they could do any more damage. Keep it up! |
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Re: My New Life
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by evangelise on
Sunday, 21st June 2009 @ 10:29:07 AM AEST
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| very heart felt poem, touching, i really like this, its a time for change , well done |
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