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Goodnight Leila
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
on
Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 07:22:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Goodnight Leila,
close your weary eyes.
Let the struggles
of a lifetime
slip away
No more teardrops,
only peaceful sleep.
'Til the dawning
of a new
and better day
Dream of laughter,
dance upon a star.
Cast the shackles
of this mortal
life aside
Goodnight Leila,
we will meet again.
Somewhere there
within the vast
celestial tide
L. Carling c2006
Copyright ©
Rakerman1999
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2006-11-06 19:22:12]
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Re: Goodnight Leila
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by shelby on
Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 10:56:38 PM AEST
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Peaceful, serene goodbye Larry.
Tender comes to mind but does this no justice. Loss slips in once again......
Hugs and rose petals for ya hun
lovessssss ya tons
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Goodnight Leila
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 11:10:39 PM AEST
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wow i agree with michelle
Somewhere there
within the vast
celestial tide
i just love that
hugs |
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Re: Goodnight Leila
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 11:52:17 AM AEST
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This is venturing out to new horizons for you!
You are versitle without a doubt good sir.
Nice farewell and tribute! |
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Re: Goodnight Leila
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by EddieDean on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 03:24:26 PM AEST
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A very beautiful good-bye to a dear friend. I hope they find peace in the great beyond. Its true that life is too hard for some of us at times, and thats when we lose great friends. A peaceful and sad poem.
Good work.
Eddie Dean |
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Re: Goodnight Leila
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by Willofree on
Friday, 10th November 2006 @ 11:11:18 AM AEST
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A somber, yet delicate and tender good bye.
Perhaps until "we meet again" rather then good bye. I really enjoy the peaceful and gentle tone.
Again that heart felt qualit y.
Well done sir,
Will |
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Re: Goodnight Leila
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by wizard on
Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 10:20:01 AM AEST
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awesome write... you will surely meet again!
wiz |
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Re: Goodnight Leila
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 12:55:50 PM AEST
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Sometimes, mere words are not enough. This is one of those times~
mary |
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Re: Goodnight Leila
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by Clarity_Rising on
Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 06:25:33 PM AEST
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| Imagining a loved one is in a better place can bring solace to those left behind. This poem is filled with tenderness and hope. Great write. |
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Re: Goodnight Leila
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 26th August 2020 @ 11:35:13 PM AEST
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Sad but lovely just the same.
Great writing.... |
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