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The traveler
Contributed by
darkscorpio
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Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 10:05:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I travel alone, no purpose, no smile
All I built is destroyed, pain will linger for a while
I came out here, to let things go
I'm not sure what the use is through
Lost my friends, lost my love
Embracing the darkness, no sun from above
I have to learn how to forgive me
Cure the blindness, clear the dark so I can see
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darkscorpio
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2006-11-06 22:05:15]
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Re: The traveler
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by shelby on
Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 10:49:00 PM AEST
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Yes do forgive yourself. The sadness in this pained me so. You aren't alone I'm always a pm away. May the sunrise in the morning bring you a greater sense of peace my friend.
Cure the blindness, clear the dark so I can see.... that line said it all right there hold onto that.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: The traveler
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 02:34:15 PM AEST
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Bravo!! Very well written!
Flow, rhyme even the turns in the meter are very impressive!
A very emotive and introcective piece! |
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