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One
Contributed by
poet_in_waiting
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Wednesday, 8th November 2006 @ 08:32:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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ONE
Can One undo
what two have done
to a young soul?
A soul that aged alone
in a world of stick man fantasy.
Watched the union
of those that should have been watching
become no more.
Both gone
one in body
one in mind,
youth left behind,
for One to find
But can One undo
what two have done
to a young soul?
His soul mends slowly
never completely
memories of endless solitude
fill dreams that
libation and toil
cannot erase
or even replace.
Barricades of the past
keep the hope at bay
can One undo
what two have done
to a young soul?
One could be the future
see through cracks in the walls
find a way in
set alight the solitary soul
allow the man to exist completely
and together with One
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Re: One
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 8th November 2006 @ 08:52:47 AM AEST
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This was a really well written piece of work... I liked the flow and I thought you did a really good job... Great poem..
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Re: One
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 03:13:04 PM AEST
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This did stand alone . I liked the message in it.
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