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The Moment
Contributed by
Winterland
on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 09:24:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Twisting hands,
tapping fingers,
beating heart,
racing thoughts,
deep breath.
Start over.
Explanation,
words upon words,
waiting for the point,
shock,
silence,
then,
Realization.
No breath,
denial,
question,
shock,
pain,
tears.
Over and over.
Never ending
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Winterland
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2006-11-09 09:24:22]
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Re: The Moment
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 01:58:12 PM AEST
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| a good abstract write ty for posting it |
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Re: The Moment
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by a7x36 on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 10:59:19 PM AEST
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this is so sad...... i know exactly what you're trying to get at
God bless |
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Re: The Moment
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 07:47:46 PM AEST
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Anguishing anticipation of dread expressed beautifully in this poem. I related and enjoyed.
wabl
KenMoore
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