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Please
Contributed by
Jen54
on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 09:30:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I don't understand
How you can still do this to me
I thought you couldn't hurt me
But today you proved me wrong
I see your eyes
And want to die
You killed my soul so long ago
And with your name
I break and fall
I told you once
How I hate you so
But my words just passed you by
And I silently scream to you this day
Just please oh please leave me this day
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Jen54
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2006-11-09 09:30:52]
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Re: Please
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by Light_to_your_Darkness on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 12:18:05 PM AEST
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| very strong emotions written so seemingly effortless, it makes perfect sense. I really enjoyed reading this :) |
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Re: Please
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 01:56:50 PM AEST
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| if its from the heart then it does make sense a hopeful poem of pain good thoughts |
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Re: Please
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by MisfitMe on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 02:00:50 PM AEST
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Wasn't that soul I felt trying to come out in this? If not, I know, I felt spirit...
BigLoveMuchPeace,
MisfitMe |
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Re: Please
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by angelfreak on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 02:52:19 PM AEST
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| Great write. I really felt the emotion and can totally relate. |
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Re: Please
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by Tiffyo4 on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 01:37:14 PM AEST
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| very strong words in this poem good work |
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