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Anger at My Mistake
Contributed by
colada
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Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 10:02:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Hey Shrew!
That's you.
If a normal heart weighed fifty pounds
Yours would weigh two
Misjudgment
Delusion
Accident
Confusion
All you were
Was a big mistake
Here are some others
I hope someone makes
I hope you fall down
An endless flight of wooden stairs
And get spinters from your toes
Up to your hairs
I hope a lumberjack
Mistakes you for a tree
And chops you in two
Or maybe in three
I hope a frog mistakes you
For a fly
And eats you for lunch
GOODBYE!
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colada
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2006-11-09 10:02:21]
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Re: Anger at My Mistake
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 11:39:09 AM AEST
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| Never look at any thing you do as a mistake but rather a life lesson, or stepping stone to a higher place. Be strong, as with any thing, anger also passes with time. great write keep up the good work. |
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Re: Anger at My Mistake
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by Light_to_your_Darkness on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 12:16:41 PM AEST
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| This is great, I love how you wrote it and the feeling behind it, although I agree...anger at a mistake is normal but don't let it get to you. Good write :) |
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Re: Anger at My Mistake
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by kalbime_aldin on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 01:15:05 PM AEST
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| i love it i mean many ppl show there anger in many ways some let it show some dont and never think of anythink as a mistake but as a lesson to never do it again! nikki |
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Re: Anger at My Mistake
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 01:55:37 PM AEST
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| we all felt that one time or the other and a interesting way to pen it good write |
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