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My Joy
Contributed by
light_to_your_darkness
on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 12:12:16 PM in AEST
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Of all the days to come
the brightest one is here
the look that's on your face is sweet
though no more than every tear
Each twinkle of your eyes
moves my heart in funny ways
the wetness strolling down
sets the pace for every day
The twisting, turning motion
tightens ropes within and out
your pleadings-sweet, though muffled
(cause it'd be rude for you to shout)
Sick and twisted monster?
that's not exactly true
I thought our fun was mutual?
I did this all for you
Well, since you feel so strongly
I guess I'll just agree
you're right in all your ramblings...
this fun is all for me
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light_to_your_darkness
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2006-11-09 12:12:16]
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Re: My Joy
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by shelby on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 12:31:47 PM AEST
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Strong flowing write. I liked how your message stood out, the ending was powerful.
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Re: My Joy
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 01:52:58 PM AEST
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| a very strong write with a good flow |
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