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traitor
Contributed by
vikingbrokk
on
Friday, 10th November 2006 @ 09:09:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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blood spilled
battles won
enemies vanquished
with you by my side
all was possible
but now...
you have been turned
corrupted
polluted
soiled
i did not believe
you could be so swayed
by lies and empty promises
is that what you wanted?
because thats all you have now
i hope it keeps you warm at night
because i won't
for you are not worthy
of even a shred of my love
you have made your bed
now live with it
you are not welcome here
anymore
Copyright ©
vikingbrokk
... [
2006-11-10 21:09:13]
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Re: traitor
(User Rating: 1 )
by trini on
Friday, 10th November 2006 @ 09:24:15 PM AEST
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wow this was really strong. i liked it alot.
the first couple of lines caught my attention, and it got better.
keep up the good work
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