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Prepare to be Disappointed
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 11:22:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Captivated by what is to come
Kept interesting
On the cusp of a new sequence
Fresh perspectives
Indulge a fleeting heart
With interludes
and substitutes
Upended roots
creative moods
Plastic shoes
tacit rules
Closet tools
faucet brews
Heated news
completed view
Just the two
holding hands
considering
Complicated requests
raw red-meat to digest
Shaky feet protest
The habitual desire to confess
Purged secretes
further the hand reaches
With fervor the novice teaches
as a falling star breaches
All atmospheric senses
an extension of the commitment
The hypothesis attributes hypnosis
to nourish this dream like state
Provided
the flirting has subsided
A separation is deeply divided
over issues never decided
Skin tissues hide the eye lids
rely on the musty climate
It must coincide with
penetrating noises
Triggers a rift
sinking this ship
And all the decency that trails behind it
So consider this,
for half a minute
straightforward with a twist
Better late then never missed
kissed with hate, and haste, and a touch of bliss
Unmasked and revealed as a pacifist-
the antithesis of a catalyst
When action precipitates and requires an energized activist
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2006-11-11 11:22:19]
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Re: Prepare to be Disappointed
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 06:28:13 PM AEST
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wow.
I really enjoyed this.
The content is rather consuming...it really does overwhelm...and challenge
Both abstract and specific...
And the rhyme scheme...of jagged-smooth texture...
Seems like you have mixed feelings about a situation?
Sounds like a relationship-type-scenario?
Either way I think you arranged your words very well, to form interesting concepts and projections.
Awesome:)
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