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The Cult of the Silent Moon
Contributed by
doug
on
Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 11:00:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I sleep in the craters of a frozen moon
far away from what you are
my teeth are sharpened 'pon the stone
my mind obeys a god of blood
I stold the eyes of giant monsters
and wore them in an iron skin
I stold the heart of an ancient dragon
and there I lay my soul within
I am the cult of the silent moon
Hatred in a haunted flesh
I'm the guardian of the master
a pet beneath the feet of doom
Chained here for eternity
heart an ancient beating drum
When thunder roars my god will wake
and I will raise a tide of blood
Copyright ©
doug
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2006-11-11 23:00:39]
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Re: The Cult of the Silent Moon
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by MisfitMe on
Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 11:47:10 PM AEST
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Dark & masterful in both content & flow...a.k.a. ya' sucked me in big time!!!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: The Cult of the Silent Moon
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 02:17:36 AM AEST
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what an awsome write
you do dark fantasy well
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Re: The Cult of the Silent Moon
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by shelby on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 09:00:32 AM AEST
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dark and haunting, flowed delightfully.
Gave me chills lol.
Parts of it almost reminded me of someone I know spooky huh? LOL
Michelle |
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Re: The Cult of the Silent Moon
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by wizard on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 10:49:46 PM AEST
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very nice, i like th flow and your word choices..
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Re: The Cult of the Silent Moon
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by True on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 11:24:21 AM AEST
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| It was an awesome poem, not what I was expecting at all. |
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Re: The Cult of the Silent Moon
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by FleurdeSang on
Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 04:54:25 AM AEST
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The title in itself drew me in like a supernova... Being a fond lover of the moon, and all.... So, I decided to take a gander, and I must say... the title does not prepare the reader for what lies inside. Exceptional, you have a wonderful gift of telling magical stories in so few words. Once again, entranced and inspired. I shall raise my own tide of blood tonight...
Beautiful, delicious, and very much inspiring. Thank you. *hugs* All my love.
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Re: The Cult of the Silent Moon
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 05:55:08 PM AEST
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| Excellent. Written with and incredible masterful artful flow. |
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Re: The Cult of the Silent Moon
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by Voyager on
Wednesday, 15th December 2010 @ 04:44:27 AM AEST
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| Great title...great poem. |
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