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A spark and a flow
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 11:15:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Visions are swirling
reflected by the moon
my eyes are shut
as I sway
to a unknown tune.
I got a hold of something
that was nothing
and I put it together
for all to view.
Flow flow flow
I like to flow
going up and down
spinning round and round,
In and out I go
a spark in the dark
emotionally I crescendo
you can feel my love
as I joyfully explode,
and sometimes when I flow
I got A tale of woe
the kind that'll
touch you
and make you sadly moan.
I got a feeling
something's coming
I'm having hallucinations
as in sensations I swirl,
I shiver and shake
and start trembling
as unknown flows
explode
in my wiggily world.
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secretwind
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2006-11-11 23:15:33]
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Re: A spark and a flow
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by shelby on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 08:54:58 AM AEST
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I really like the flow to this flowing write:).
Nicely done makes the reader think some.
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Re: A spark and a flow
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by emystar on
Saturday, 18th November 2006 @ 02:58:55 AM AEST
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Well, I get the visions of a uch, well u've dumbfounded me again.
big smiles,
emy |
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Re: A spark and a flow
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 05:19:55 PM AEST
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The prophet says your wiggly world is the foyer to heaven. What an excellent gem from "spark to flow."
Bravo
Peace
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