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Shattered
Contributed by
kaleidoscope
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Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 02:54:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tears drop, heart stops, as the hand hits your face.
Fears come, you're done, wishing you were in another place.
Hands shake, you're raped, but by the one you love.
Eyes shut, you're cut, as he holds you down from above.
Body hurts, Hearts worse, how can he say he loves you?
Door closed, Left alone, what did you ever do?
Shattered inside, numb mind, how could he do this.
Dont yell, cant tell, cant move you're in pieces.
Cant feel, youll deal, because you love him truly.
Whywhy, why would he do this to me!!
~I only had wanted to take it slowly.~
Date rape is real.and because feelings are involved in many cases it stays hidden but it never should be! Love would do no such things as these.. and no matter how much you think you like/love him/her... they dont care about you!! No one should have to live with that inside! Love does not pressure either!
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kaleidoscope
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2006-11-12 14:54:58]
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Re: Shattered
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by MandiLee on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 04:13:12 PM AEST
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| omg that poem is soo amazing and if that happened to you im so sorry, i know how that feels... |
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Re: Shattered
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by Honey56 on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 04:23:05 PM AEST
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I tuly hate if this bad thing happen to you..Your post here will be a reminder that date rape is real!
Blessings
honey56 |
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Re: Shattered
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by emystar on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 11:20:08 PM AEST
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Wow, this is powerfull.
Heart wrenching, but a well thought out write.
huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Shattered
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by Alison on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 03:20:23 AM AEST
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| its sad that so many go through things like this and never tell b/c they dont know how or what to say....i would really like to read some more happy work from you...hope to soon. good write, very powerful. |
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