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Our Bright Future
Contributed by
soad811
on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 08:47:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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As swift as the wind,
as clear as any color,
is the love of another,
the love of a friend.
Plural in tense,
enveloped in heat,
from your eyes to your feet,
is the intangibility of penance.
A simple "im sorry" would do just fine,
but the "i was wrong" approach is undoubtedly mine.
Care is the hot summer zepher,
where hope is the leaves it picks up and swings,
from its vortex to its buzz-like sounds and rings,
the zepher reveals pleasure.
Comfort is thrown,
to many new places,
when trust is placed,
in those who are unknown.
Seeing the truth,
one might say,
that on this day,
wisdom is youth.
"The children are the future",
many have said,
but has it been read,
in a book's binding suture?
What one seeks,
mostlikely is pleasure,
where warmth and love,
are made to measure.
Copyright ©
soad811
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2006-11-12 20:47:29]
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Re: Our Bright Future
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 09:12:25 PM AEST
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great write! I especially enjoy the last lines, sums it up quite nicely!!
Jenni xxoo |
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