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Flames of Desire
Contributed by
journey
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Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 07:55:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The flames of the fire dance in the middle of the night. The warmth and glow are such a delight. A bottle of chilled red wine, candles burning with ambiance. A bouquet of red roses adds to the fragrance that already flows. I look in your eyes and you look into mine. We gently drift off to our special place in time. Two hearts joined as one, tonight we live for each other. In the glow of the ambers you pour us wine. We entwine our arms and elegantly take a sip never leaving our warm embrace. Forever together we will be, in the light of the fire I pledge my eternity.
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Re: Flames of Desire
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by spiritwind on
Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 12:42:31 AM AEST
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This is nice work but would be easier to read if it were in stanza form.
It provides beautiful romantic undertones.
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