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Let Me Go
Contributed by
Jen54
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Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 08:34:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Why do I breathe
I can not be saved
You can not save me
Yes you try
And yes we talk
But you know your efforts are all in vain
So stop this foolish game
And just let me go
For I am nothing more than thing
That you hate the most
Copyright ©
Jen54
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2006-11-13 08:34:08]
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Re: Let Me Go
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by purplestary on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 09:41:07 AM AEST
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| short but to the point and very interesting....i loved it.. thanks for posting it. |
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Re: Let Me Go
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by wizard on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 10:03:25 AM AEST
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nicely done,
wiz |
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Re: Let Me Go
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 10:50:03 AM AEST
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| To the point, well done |
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Re: Let Me Go
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 12:33:13 PM AEST
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Powerful and to the point.. I liked this.. Well done.. I can relate to this as well.
Take care
Christina |
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