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Waiting on Death
Contributed by
brave_celt
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Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 11:05:29 AM in AEST
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I stroll down a lonesome road
carrying my burdens and a spirit breaking load
I look over my shoulder seeing nobody behind me
silently praying that nobody will find me
then I sit beneath an old oak tree
to hang my head and cry
crying the tears of a youth who's waiting to die
because darlin i'm only waitng to die
so I hang my head down low
knowing that nomatter how hard I try
i'll never get out of this world alive
so I just hang my head and cry.... waiting to die
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Re: Waiting on Death
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by MisfitMe on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 11:15:22 AM AEST
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Good flow...sad, but understandable content.
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: Waiting on Death
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by Nothingness on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 11:32:19 AM AEST
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| Goof write yeah your not alone on these feelings... and yeah they are hard to deal with but your not alone draw strength from the others that have gone through it and survived, your not alone i'm only a pm away if you need to talk, i really enjoyed your write keep it up =) |
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Re: Waiting on Death
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by angelfreak on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 12:25:18 PM AEST
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Nice write. Like the others said, you are certainly not alone in your feelings.
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