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TIRED
Contributed by
angelfreak
on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 01:09:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I sit alone in this empty room,
With only thoughts and memories,
No one can feel the pain Im in,
No one listens, no one sees.
The black tears fall from my eyes,
I have hidden them from everyone,
My pain, it will not be over soon,
I think its just begun.
Pooling on the floor of blackness,
How many tears do I have to cry?
Will you ever understand?
Please tell me how many times I have to die.
Im tired of hiding everything from you.
My soul is tired. My heart is mangled.
Or is it the other way around?
It feels like my entire self is being mangled.
Im so damn tired of living my life like this.
Will anyone ever be able to see the real me?
Can I ever be free of my burdens?
Or is this battered soul what Im destined to be?
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angelfreak
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2006-11-13 13:09:15]
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Re: TIRED
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by Saloni on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 01:15:07 PM AEST
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| i can understand ur pain.. im goin through it too.. keep strong.. well written tc |
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Re: TIRED
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 05:03:28 PM AEST
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first off, same thing as the previous comment said, and second, you want people to understand try telling them, instead of hiding it. sure, you can either sit in your little corner and say how tired you are of hiding, or you can either come out and risk it and if it fails then you can go back to that corner but at least know that you've tried. but good write.
--talli
ps: i'm often chastised for being too brutally honest, so feel free to cuss me out in a pm. |
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