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The Nectar, The Life
Contributed by
atra_phasma
on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 07:55:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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you are the nectar
you are the life
you are the pain and
you are the knife
how you control me
i cant explain
how you can heal me
but yet cause so much pain?
You found me on the street broken and alone
you took me under your wing
andit was to me your soul you loaned
our love was passionate,
full of energy and life
until you found the day to use me as your scythe?
you are the nectar
you are the life
you are the pain and
you are the knife
how you control me
i cant explain
how you can heal me
but yet cause so much pain?
You found that you could use me
to fill your own desires
our love was now dissolving
before my very eyes
i tried to talk to you,
to bring my lover back,
but you just beat into me,
the qualitys I lack,
you are the nectar
you are the life
you are the pain and
you are the knife
how you control me
i cant explain
how you can heal me
but yet cause so much pain?
But yet you come back some nights,
full of lovers fire,
Why can't our lives be just like this
instead of a black, swampy mire?
you are the nectar
you are the life
you are the pain and
you are the knife
how you control me
i cant explain
how you can heal me
but yet cause so much pain?
Tonight I've had enough,
I'll take this pain no more,
To you i have to say,
Go Find another *****,
who you can bend and break,
And twist to do your will,
So now i've had enough good bye my love, my dear (Gun SFX)
you are the nectar
you are the life
you are the pain and
you are the knife
how you control me
i cant explain
how you can heal me
but yet cause so much pain?
(fade out in this refrain)
you are the nectar
you are the life
you are the pain and
you are the knife
how you control me
i cant explain
how you can heal me
but yet cause so much pain?
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Re: The Nectar, The Life
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 01:46:01 AM AEST
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Awesomely written.
Good work.
huggs, smiles,
emy
Stay strong! |
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Re: The Nectar, The Life
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by Amicus on
Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 03:46:29 PM AEST
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Hey, nice write it is pretty good and you have a title! pretty good. the chorus fits well with everything and it helps the poem/song.
nice job!
Benny (i didnt use your name) |
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