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OMEGA IS THE PRELUDE
Contributed by
skyhawk432
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Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 09:34:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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ALPHA IS THE END
Striker-Critic, rust-chains, rust-chains
Striker-Critic, rust-chains, rust-chains
Sample the season, satirical reason
from backyard bashing behind the mind.
Timeless and treason, attacked by the legion
of scale-men stashing the sign-ful fine.
Social-Saint-On, drip-sink, drip-sink
Social-Saint-On, drip-sink, drip-sink
Finger the flawless, middle-men; lawless
with pachyderm passing, be-still the kill.
Back-scratch a claw-less, simpleton "CAW-less"
make terminate-trashing, break-mill his bill.
Satire-Iron, beta-end, beta-end
Satire-Iron, beta-end, beta-end
THIS IS THE BEGINNING
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skyhawk432
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2006-11-13 21:34:43]
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Re: OMEGA IS THE PRELUDE
(User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 11:13:29 AM AEST
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I truly enjoyed the lyrical word play here rolling as a march song ten people carrying immense weight in time with their steps... and in line to repeat till the task is accomplished.
Your emphasis lands on the switch as beginings and endings are like lovers entwined where you cannot tell where one flows into the other...
Keep your pen in winged flight
Peace
Yangdantien
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