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Waltz With Life When Death is Near
Contributed by
blindchoice
on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 09:46:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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cross the proud with the sickened
and leave the scilence to dance
dreams of love and sorrow
occuring till the dead stand
blow a crimson frost
over the feilds of life
signal with a passionate fire
and hide me from my sight
alone in a crowd of many
vivid only in the dark
demask ourselfs
and end at the start
Copyright ©
blindchoice
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2006-11-13 21:46:58]
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Re: Waltz With Life When Death is Near
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by wizard on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 10:11:53 PM AEST
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awesome write! i love it!
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Re: Waltz With Life When Death is Near
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 12:18:45 AM AEST
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One to awaken the brain. Thanks.
Great writing!
huggs,
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Re: Waltz With Life When Death is Near
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 12:42:20 AM AEST
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so much was said with so few words...brilliantly written, i loved it.
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