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Stop
Contributed by
marcrob
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Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 03:24:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Like to continue
Taking a step back
Too much too little
I feel I'm going to snap
Love to be hurt
Hate to be seen
Life to be lived
Death to be clean
Be it may
But not today
Time to waste
Life to taste
The decision I have to make
The pleasures for me to take
The pain I am to recieve
I hide here behind this screen
Copyright ©
marcrob
... [
2006-11-14 15:24:48]
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Re: Stop
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by RandyBabyx3 on
Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 03:57:53 PM AEST
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I like the story that hides beneath the poem...I really like the way you worded this poem.
~Miranda |
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Re: Stop
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 12:47:16 PM AEST
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Interesting write.
whisper |
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Re: Stop
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by HidayahIsmawi on
Thursday, 9th July 2009 @ 06:59:28 PM AEST
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| Nice effort :) |
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