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Daddy will you...
Contributed by
Helena
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Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 08:37:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
FathersDayPoems
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Daddy will you help me stand against the waves of the sea,
will you tell me stories time and again of princesses I wish I could be?
Daddy will you carry me on your shoulders so high,
will you write my name upon the sand and tell me I can fly?
Daddy will you check the closet, the window, and underneath my bed,
will you be the one to save me from the clowns that I dread?
Daddy will you buy me dresses, pink with lace trim,
will you check the water; never drop me while learning how to swim?
Daddy will you eat the cookies baked twice too long,
will you go to the shows to hear me sing my song?
Daddy will you teach me about football, comics, and outer space
will you help me carry the boxes when I get my own place?
Daddy will you be my judge of character when Im too blind to see,
will you be the one I trust for happiness guaranteed?
Daddy will you tell me Im a vision when you hand me my bouquet,
will you dance just one dance with me on my wedding day?
Daddy will you be there to help me stand and fight,
will you save me from myself when it would be easy to turn and take flight?
Daddy will you always be the one steady as a rock,
my superman in a hat, my one and only Pops?
Copyright ©
Helena
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2006-11-14 20:37:53]
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Re: Daddy will you...
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by ruby_dreamer on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 02:13:13 AM AEST
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| This is very sweet. It reminds me of my own father and I'm actually inspired now to write one for him. It brought a little bit of emotion up in my throat...=} Very sweet. Thank you. |
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Re: Daddy will you...
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 01:33:24 PM AEST
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I had a few tears, what a beautiful write. This is how is should be.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Daddy will you...
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by Muhammadshanazar on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 12:43:09 PM AEST
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The poem show deep attachment with the father, emotional poem; very nice job.
Muhammad Shanazar |
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