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Tonight
Contributed by
Shadows_In_The_Darkness
on
Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 09:50:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Tonight will be the very last time I cry,
Tonight Ill make sure to say Goodbye.
Tonight Ill make sure to tuck the boys in tight,
Tonight will be the last to experience their light.
Tonight will be the final breathe passed,
Tonight will be my absolute last.
Tonight will be my final heartbreak,
Tonight my life I will take.
Tonight will be the last I see,
Tonight will be theyll see the last of me.
Tonight is the night Ill finally give in,
Tonight Ill let temptation win.
Tonights kiss will be the last for my boys,
Tonight Ill end all of the noise.
Tonight Ill stop all the pain,
Tonight Ill finally rest my brain.
Tonight will be the end of my fears,
Tonights the night I dreamed of for years.
Tonight is when everyones problems will be done,
Tonights the night I finally come undone.
Tonight the curtain will finally come down,
Tonights the last night that Ill be around.
Tonight I got the courage to finally go,
Tonight shouldve happened long ago.
Tonight Ill take one last look at their faces,
Tonight will be the last to feel their sweet embraces.
Tonight is finally come and is here,
Tonight I have no more fear
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2006-11-14 21:50:55]
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Re: Tonight
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 12:32:08 AM AEST
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This poem is REALLY powerful and deep. I know how you feel and at times, I wish i could do the same. But Im sure there is one person in this screwed up world that loves you!
Great Job! |
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Re: Tonight
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by Nothingness on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 08:06:25 AM AEST
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| wow...deep write and rather scarey i hope you are not contemplating....i mean yeah life sucks at times but sooner or later it will get better! if you need any help or just someone to listen and to care when it seems no one else does i am a pm away again i hope it was just a really good write..but if its more then that please think a little harder.. |
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Re: Tonight
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by spiritwind on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 12:25:26 PM AEST
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I'm not sure if this is just writing for the sake of letting emotions go or if it is serious.
If you have children you need to stay for them.
Life is always hard but tests are what make us stronger. Please reconsider.
SW |
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