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Our love
Contributed by
joe89
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Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 04:41:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Our love, spoke for the first time today
This ribbon has been outward rolling
For over a year
Two bodies touching in spirit, not in soul
Until today
I spoke to you
I felt your touch and it was beautiful
Like you
Always said you were
Youre my girl
Lets share lives
I cant not love you for one more day
Why do feelings never start this way?
Copyright ©
joe89
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2006-11-15 16:41:20]
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Re: Our love
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Saturday, 2nd June 2007 @ 01:37:50 AM AEST
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This was a really well written poem and I could feel your love through this.. Well done and well expressed.
Take care
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