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No one cares about me
Contributed by
keaton
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Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 08:26:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The light is fading
the end is near
my mind is blank
clouded by fear
the blood is rushing
my veins are thin
my bodys cold
as blood stains my skin
my life is over
no one cares about me
if you live the way i do
pain is all you'll see
as I ly here dieing
thinking of people who try to help me
they say there are better wasy to handle this
but suicide is the only answer i see.
so as I leave you
i have something to say
forget about me I will nerv come back
O well doesnt matter you never cared about me any way
Copyright ©
keaton
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2006-11-15 20:26:52]
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Re: No one cares about me
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by emystar on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 01:50:11 AM AEST
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Very sad.
prayer,
emy |
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Re: No one cares about me
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by sometime_around_midnight on
Sunday, 5th July 2009 @ 03:49:15 PM AEST
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| wow that was beautifully written, a couple typos that takes away from the flow a little but thats just minor. you did a very good job on this you got your thoughts across very clearly and effeciantly. Thank you for sharing this with us its beautiful. |
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Re: No one cares about me
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by mr_know_it_all on
Tuesday, 7th July 2009 @ 08:59:10 AM AEST
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| All I can say is "WOW!" I was almost in tears when I read this piece! Wonderful job expressing your thoughts. |
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Re: No one cares about me
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by evangelise on
Monday, 13th July 2009 @ 11:06:30 AM AEST
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| Very moving, and very intermit with feelings between life and death, very well wrote |
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