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Gathered Tears
Contributed by
ek_da_poet
on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 09:13:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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the gathered tears combined,
equalled to a waterfall,
before it began
i was living out of harms way,
portraying cartoon characters with my daddy
and one day he got unhealthy
rushed to the hospital to find out he was dying
of a disease, thats shaky
when it came to an end relatives assembled like a tribe
only as people to show remorse
watery eyes eager to drop
descending down my cheek
diving towards the palms,
to be caught which is our grief
and all i can say is.....
wake up, you cannot go
resting like cannot be disturbed
what to do
you will be missed by the ones who cared
we blew you a kiss, memories seize to exist
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2006-11-16 09:13:41]
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Re: Gathered Tears
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by myloveispure on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 09:19:40 AM AEST
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amazing write,i know how you feel im losing my mom right now, this is just such a great write!!!!keep it up,i will continue to read your work.
mucho amor,
brittany |
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Re: Gathered Tears
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by kalbime_aldin on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 10:12:23 AM AEST
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| i really like thow you have put the words i cant asy i know how you feel but i know how it is to watch some one you love just walk out of your life like that Nikki |
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Re: Gathered Tears
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by The_Unknown on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 10:18:03 AM AEST
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This is a good poem, I'm sorry about your dad.
luvs ya
.::Jess::. |
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Re: Gathered Tears
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by The_Young_Poet on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 04:44:50 PM AEST
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| Another great write! You showed the emotions of the poem well as usual. :) |
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