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A Note on Mellow and Blue
Contributed by
WickdlyInocnt
on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Only in a dream could you see
Or imagine a place;
A mellow, dusty place,
Touched by the suns last rays.
Rays of gold,
Amber,
Yellow,
And brown,
Flickering and dancing on water,
A lake of dazzling brightness,
Reflecting a glowing yellow ball,
Sitting on mountains.
And as the sun climbs down,
A blue night moon gets ready to spring;
As the gold sun leaves mellow yellow,
And blue sets in.
The sun sends a reminder,
A shaft of amber
Explodes on the white form of the moon,
For a moment only,
Leaving mellow to remember...
Copyright ©
WickdlyInocnt
... [
2003-02-17 19:40:00]
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Re: A Note on Mellow and Blue
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 10:32:21 PM AEST
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Lovely visual expression....
Keep up the good work!
Angel always....
GOD SPEED! |
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Re: A Note on Mellow and Blue
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 09:38:49 AM AEST
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| JUST PURE BEAUTIFUL,SO RELAXING,CHRISTINA |
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Re: A Note on Mellow and Blue
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:04:37 PM AEST
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| lovely. =] |
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