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River song dreaming
Contributed by
recklessguy
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Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 12:20:58 PM in AEST
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oops
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I heard the willows whisper to me
near the banks they swayed they swayed.
Stars alone dotting the sky
pleasure for a simply man such as I.
I remember the smell of perfume.
I faintly can smell it now, searching the memory.
The song of the river still near.
Flowing in tune with a memory, the dream is forever mine.
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recklessguy
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2006-11-16 12:20:58]
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Re: River song dreaming
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by annoiosa on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 01:52:57 PM AEST
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| I closed my eyes and tried to picture it...a lovely scene :) |
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Re: River song dreaming
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by shelby on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 02:39:50 PM AEST
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I know of the perfume * smiles*
It is a beautiful memory and poem dreamy infact, you did make a type o boo boo though.
Heeeeee
10-4 back at ya
~Michelle~ |
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Re: River song dreaming
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by MisfitMe on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 04:29:20 PM AEST
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Short & sweet & so much more. Wow!!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
MisfitMe
I'm there right now! How beautiful |
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Re: River song dreaming
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by Supercreep on
Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 05:56:38 PM AEST
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| Cool poem. With your simple language, short lines and general choice of words and tone you have successfully established a dreamy, lost in the past but forever here, ambient water, night time feel to this poem. I am always trying to write about my favourite river (ex canal) river Lea but everything I do write comes out like a cliche so am envious of this.. |
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