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Until Then
Contributed by
annoiosa
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Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 01:31:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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You had me a little worried
When you wrote to me last.
I didn't know what to think
Or even what to ask.
I think you're feeling guilty
And maybe don't know what to do.
I think you needed to talk to someone
But, no one else knew.
Never forget what I told you
That I will always be around.
To talk, to listen, or whatever.
And try to pick you up, when you are down.
I'm so glad you answered today
It felt so good to hear you.
It reassured me that you were okay
But also made me want to be near you.
I know you've got alot on your mind
And can't concern yourself with me
So if you ever need me to leave you alone
I understand, and I'll let it be.
But I hope that we can keep talking
And I hope things get better for you at home.
I hope to see you again, really soon.
Until then, I'll be alone.
Copyright ©
annoiosa
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2006-11-16 13:31:17]
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Re: Until Then
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by MisfitMe on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 03:36:04 PM AEST
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Whoever they are I hope they appreciate the thought & effort you're willing to expend on their behalf. Nice flow...
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Re: Until Then
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by wizard on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 10:05:07 PM AEST
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awesome write, i loved it!
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Re: Until Then
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by one-curly-fry on
Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 06:11:48 PM AEST
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Another good poem. The rhyme pattern and flow work well. The person to whom this addresses is very lucky to have someone who cares so much.
Nice write!
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Re: Until Then
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 04:28:28 AM AEST
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| Inner thoughts and feelings are how we deal with life. Sharing the same helps us grow and lean to become better people. I enjoyed the write thanks and I think I know where you are coming from! |
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