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Love with a SPPLASH
Contributed by
moldwarp
on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 08:55:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Undressing myself
in a manner that yearns
for your eyes to do that deed instead
no need to remind me
of the stones tied to my feet
let me help you beloved
i hate to be such a bother
just place me in slowly
so my splash won't startle you
i'll pardon this whole thing
but never forgive myself
i should have dressed a little warmer
while alone on the bottom
i've seen this place before worshiping you
this deep cold mess
but at least ..
with your stones, your rope
loving me to death
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moldwarp
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2006-11-16 20:55:13]
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Re: Love with a SPPLASH
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 09:27:34 PM AEST
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Definately one of the best poems I've read in a while, quite genuis actualy, made me think a bit...very good write thanks for sharing! Keep it up!!
Jenni xxoo |
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