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my love is yours to borrow
Contributed by
blindchoice
on
Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 10:51:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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our hot sweaty bodys
sticking to the leather seat
moving closer and closer
until our lips meet
your hands feels warm
and you place them on my waist
you kiss me softly
and tell me directly to my face
you tell me we have to stop
although the temptation made it hard
you said it wasnt my fault
you just promised yourself from the start
you said " i dont think your ready,
and thats ok.
and even though your not,
im still here to stay."
i sat up
and drew a heart in the fog
and thats when i relized
there is more to you than i thought
you have a heart full of wonder
and a mind full of sorrow
and just so you know
my love is yours to borrow
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2006-11-17 22:51:14]
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Re: my love is yours to borrow
(User Rating: 1 )
by silver_crested_shadow on
Saturday, 18th November 2006 @ 11:51:30 PM AEST
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| awsome, i loved the layout of this poem and to me at the begining it seemed like a different kind of poem and it all changed within the last couple paragraphs, either way i still enjoyed reading it. |
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