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I Need You
Contributed by
EddieDean
on
Saturday, 18th November 2006 @ 12:59:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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So,
You want to leave?
Go ahead,
I'll live for now,
Some how...
I need your Love,
But you turn away from Me.
Now I am Alone,
Completely.
My Heart grows dark,
Without your light,
I care not to Fight.
Not for Love,
Not for Life,
Not for Anything.
Go Ahead,
Leave me Now,
Though you go,
Know this,
Without you,
I am Nothing.
Without you,
I will Die.
But you go and leave Me,
Do not look to ever see Me,
For I am now going to Die.
Alone.
Without your Love,
To keep me Alive.
Copyright ©
EddieDean
... [
2006-11-18 12:59:55]
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Re: I Need You
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by wizard on
Saturday, 18th November 2006 @ 06:04:28 PM AEST
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sad and moving, nicely done!
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Re: I Need You
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by MandiLee on
Saturday, 18th November 2006 @ 07:24:32 PM AEST
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| its so beautiful simple and yet emotional! and wow you r amazing u captured the emotion in this poem! |
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Re: I Need You
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 06:02:09 PM AEST
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A sad and very moving piece of poetry you have here. I'm so sorry this happened to you.
I hope things are much better for you now~
Take care
hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: I Need You
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by MandiLee on
Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 09:37:34 AM AEST
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this poem is magical i love it!! I will be sure to read it again next weekend im kind of worried about next week, but thats ok i will probably have a knew poem about my soap box, well i would be messaging you on myspace but I'm at school and they block that site and i can't think of how to break the code to get on it! so i will when i get home! but i really do love this poem it hits home, you shot and you scored! lol so i guess i will talk to you later!
love,
mandi |
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