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The Clown
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wordpoet
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Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The clown he wears a smile, for all the world to see,
Playing games hell make you laugh and set your spirit free.
Nothing seems to bother him, no burden brings him down,
And when hes in your presence youll never see a frown.
He paints a mask upon his face, emotions in plain sight,
As though hes in a perfect world and everything is right.
And as you watch each obstacle that gets into his way,
Youll see him take it all in stride, its just another day.
But hidden from the audience, lies the man you do not know,
Who plays his part while youre around, continuing the show.
But watch him close, look past the smile, the truth is what youll see,
Theres a deep unending pain inside, the clown you see is me.
By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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Re: The Clown
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 11:09:50 PM AEST
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Excellent write, Doug... I can relate.. This is so well written...
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Re: The Clown
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by blueheart on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 11:19:40 PM AEST
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| It's a well written poem. This really struck me cos I've felt like that too many times. |
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Re: The Clown
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 01:35:43 AM AEST
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| someone who can look past the mask has a precious gift... |
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Re: The Clown
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 05:13:08 AM AEST
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| " there is great unending pain inside, the clown you see is me' .. how humble you are. its a great write. more true to life.. venkat |
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Re: The Clown
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 09:56:32 AM AEST
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| DOUG,SOME THINK THE CLOWNS ARE ALWAYS HAPPY,BUT REALLY THEY HIDE IT,GREAT PEICE VERY TRUE,CHRISTINA |
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Re: The Clown
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by Lia on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 03:10:19 PM AEST
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| Oh my...I'm speechless...and you should know ..that doesn't happen often :) |
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Re: The Clown
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by ginsdance on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 10:23:05 PM AEST
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Excellent write, yet again. Bravo. You make everything come together so beautifully although it is a very serious piece. Great job!
Ginnie |
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Re: The Clown
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by Jilli_bean on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 04:07:31 PM AEST
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| it's true...no one wants to show their feelings ...they can't ... so they hide...they become vunerable when they show feelings...and it hurts...but i am glad you over came that ...it shows how strong ...you reallly are...or how confused you like to make people...but I loved it. |
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