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Ocean named emotion
Contributed by
Recovery_poet
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Sunday, 19th November 2006 @ 03:46:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Ive never felt the way I do about a person the way I feel about you
For years I ran from anything with even a hint of pure emotion
Now I dive as deep as I can into the vast ocean of feeling that is within me
I float there for awhile and watch the beauty of it all flowing around my skin
I open my eyes and see that I have drifted to shore I see some one is there waiting
A sweet scent fills my nasal cavities and pulls me towards her standing there
And here on the shore of the beautiful ocean deep within my soul
I stand in front of her and without a word she is singing to me
The silent notes penetrate my brain and her sweet song brings me to my knees
On my knees I look into the eyes of the gentlest soul and my head is filled with words
I place my shaking lips to hers and the sandy shore becomes a blank canvas
Both our naked bodies turn to paint
Memories, fears joys, pains souls are blended together from within this sweet embrace
And when the seemingly endless kiss ends the scene transforms yet again
Lying on our backs on top of cool blades of grass under the warm sun rising
Each blade of grass tells a different story with its cool touch on our warm skin
This silent sunrise beautiful painting and vast ocean are where I go when I think of you
In a world so focused on the chaos of advancement
I find moments of comfort and serenity when I am standing on the edge of this cliff
Hundreds of feet below the ocean screams
Hundreds of feet below you wait
On the shore singing
Its time for me to dive in again
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Re: Ocean named emotion
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by Saloni on
Sunday, 19th November 2006 @ 04:26:42 PM AEST
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| its just wow!!!! well done |
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Re: Ocean named emotion
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by Benny14 on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 04:03:49 AM AEST
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| very good structure...and damn if i aint jealous of the sentiment. |
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