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Lies
Contributed by
trackiller2006
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Sunday, 19th November 2006 @ 07:13:23 PM in AEST
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What's left for the one whos life is broken?
When the web of lies catches up to him.
What happens to him when all the people he calles "friend"turn their back on him?
As he screams at the top of his lungs the lies he swears to be the truth, who listens?
Nobody...and yet...everybody.
While he weaves a tapastry of deceit, the only people who listen are the weak, the easily controlled.
Soon, he will build an empire...one of falsehoods and half-truths.
Why?
Ask me and find out.
Copyright ©
trackiller2006
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2006-11-19 19:13:23]
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Re: Lies
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by MyNameIsJonas on
Sunday, 19th November 2006 @ 07:44:30 PM AEST
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Why?
I wish to find out ._. |
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Re: Lies
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by Kensar on
Sunday, 19th November 2006 @ 08:14:35 PM AEST
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| Your poem really goes deep. I can easily relate to the tone you're putting out. So i'm asking now and i'm supposed to find out, let me know;) |
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Re: Lies
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by Benny14 on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 03:55:22 AM AEST
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| i really like the ending, i know its a short poem, but it still feels like a twist ending, or at least a revealing one. great job. |
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Re: Lies
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by purplestary on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 03:27:57 PM AEST
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| nice. I would like to know why. :-) |
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