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Romanticlly Retarded
Contributed by
PoeticHybrid
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Sunday, 19th November 2006 @ 11:44:41 PM in AEST
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Romantically retarded
Emotionally guarded
What a fine mess I am
Desperate to find my role
Terrified of losing control
But is that such a bad thing?
Moving too delicately
My worst enemy is entropy
Time to go back to my old ways
Chaotically organized mind
Not always trying to be kind
Just calling it like I see it
So consider this a warning shot
Cause now I'll give all I've got
No matter how much it hurts
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PoeticHybrid
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2006-11-19 23:44:41]
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Re: Romanticlly Retarded
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by purplestary on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 02:37:20 PM AEST
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| no amount of characters can ever sum up the stuff that goes on in peoples lives, we just try our best because the little we can explain, the little we can show the world through our words makes us feel a tiny bit better i guess. this was a nice write. |
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Re: Romanticlly Retarded
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by one-curly-fry on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 05:30:31 AM AEST
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Nice write and I see by the title that your mate got you thinking... Good to see that your thoughts broke through the block!
I can relate, as you know. I'm going through a kind of rebooting myself (which is obviously where your at with this write). I really like your statement in the last stanza! Brings it all together very nicely!
- Tim |
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