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You were mine, once upon a time
Contributed by
lipsofanangel
on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 01:09:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I loved you once upon a time
I held you in my arms
You were the only one I truly cared about
You left me once upon a time
And the tears that fell
Drowned all other feeling
for any one else
I cried over you once upon a time
I tore my room to shambles
I put holes in my wall
I took the fall for you
once upon a time
And you returned the favor
By spreading rumors that would ruin
My reputation
I would have died for you
Once upon a time
and I thought that you felt the same
I lied to defend you
I protected you
And you payed me back
With nothing but hurt and pain
You were my heart my soul and my life
once upon a time.
The time wasnt so long ago
and I can still see it clearly
Yea I once loved you
But you betrayed my love
And caused me to hate
Now dear love
The time has come for you to feel pain
Copyright ©
lipsofanangel
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2006-11-20 13:09:14]
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Re: You were mine, once upon a time
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by wizard on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 03:15:27 PM AEST
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a very touching write, i feel your pain... you know what they say..."all's fair in love and war"...
time heals all wounds, this i know for a fact...
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Re: You were mine, once upon a time
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 04:58:40 PM AEST
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I think the road to true love is a battlefield.
Sometimes you have to fight many battles before you can claim victory.
I hope you find it
Steve |
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Re: You were mine, once upon a time
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by epsftbllchic1617 on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 11:40:13 AM AEST
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| OoO revenge. I love how you ended that poem, that was a great way to tie it all together. I really liked it. |
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