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Weeping Willow
Contributed by
Harimitsu
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Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 01:36:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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See the crying, weeping willow
That bows it's head to shed it's tears
And every teardrop falls on down
And through the earth it spears
Where the dirt and grass drink thirstily
As if they enjoy the willow's pain
They drink the coming tears
Like the teardrops of the rain
And they sway and move into the wind
To dance as if in joy
As if the willow's lonely pain
Is that of a simple toy
And the willow weeps all alone
For no-one seems to care
And the pour little weeping willow
Accepts that life's not fair
So cry your tears my little willow
Accept the pain you're in
My lonely little weeping willow
With so much heartache in
Cry today and cry tonight
The pain will never heal
It's the only thing within this world
That you will ever feel
Copyright ©
Harimitsu
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2006-11-20 13:36:51]
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Re: Weeping Willow
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by purplestary on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 02:13:37 PM AEST
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| beautiful and sad. as if your talking to me, i'm sure many others will feel the same. nicely done. |
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Re: Weeping Willow
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by Alison on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 02:42:56 PM AEST
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| wonderful!! sad...but a great write!! |
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Re: Weeping Willow
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by RandyBabyx3 on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 03:05:52 PM AEST
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| This reminds me of...me. I like it a lot. Good job. |
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Re: Weeping Willow
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by wizard on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 03:12:45 PM AEST
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very nice...those last 3 lines are great, as is the whole poem...nicely done..
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Re: Weeping Willow
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by shelby on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 06:06:32 PM AEST
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An incredible write you have here.
Flowed nicely, meter wonderful also.
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Re: Weeping Willow
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by Nothingness on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 09:04:19 AM AEST
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Wow...This is such a wonderful poem sad but so beautiful, My favorite lines are;
And the willow weeps all alone
For no-one seems to care
And the pour little weeping willow
Accepts that life's not fair
Fantastic write your an excelent write! |
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