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His Hall
Contributed by
MisfitMe
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Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 07:08:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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While deep in thought his powerful hand stroked~
the length of silver hair grown from his chin
In his other was held a pipe from smoked~
that at last he had lit, near ready to begin...
Sitting before the halls great fireplace~
in which a dozen grown men could stand unbent
Finally to his audience he turned his face~
as a servant tending the flames, came & went...
His favorite hound lay well fed at his feet~
while others in the rushes still search for scraps
On benches & floors the men had taken seats~
with both women & children held in their laps...
Their upturned faces & expectant eyes~
had all on himself come to rest
This man in which their faith had come to lie~
having never been by their enemys best...
To be continued...
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MisfitMe
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2006-11-20 19:08:38]
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Re: His Hall
(User Rating: 1 )
by doug on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 08:47:32 AM AEST
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You have my interest once again.
I think I will have to come back for
the next one to see where this is
going. Take care , Truly , Doug |
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Re: His Hall
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 11:00:01 AM AEST
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Your writing sucks me deeply in. I felt as if I were there, anticipating what indeed was going to happen next. I will have to wait huh? along with the rest.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: His Hall
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 07:33:01 PM AEST
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My you are so good do you know that?. You can keep your reader captivated from the beginning to the end of your writes. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Awaiting the continuation of this~
warm hugs,
sue m |
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