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Carnival of Death
Contributed by
trackiller2006
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Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 07:41:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I've searched everywhere.
From back alleys to the houses of sin.
My life is shattered, scattered on the floor.
My soul is crushed.
My mind...a desolate wasteland.
Nothing can heal this pain.
Drugs...left me a hollow shell.
Suicidal thoughts run rampant through my head.
How should I do it?
Swing from the rafters?
Run a blade down a vein?
Swallow a handful of pills?
No, I choose a different path.
Life.
My search for purpose is at an end.
My purpose is simply...death.
As much and as many as possible.
Look deep inside of me.
You will see pure, unmitigated evil.
And when it catches you in its glare, the grin will spread from ear to ear.
You will be the next victim in my Carnival of Death.
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Re: Carnival of Death
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by purplestary on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 10:45:56 PM AEST
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nicely done..i love the way you go from choosing a different path..that path being life...to the purpose of that life being death....as much and as many as possible....oh..it's so wonderfull.... my favorate lines are the last three..."You will see pure, unmitigated evil.
And when it catches you in its glare, the grin will spread from ear to ear.
You will be the next victim in my Carnival of Death." ...evil at its finest....this is exactly what the world does to us..this is what it makes us...but i haven't seen it expressed this well in.....well...since never .... |
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