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Flowers On The Hill
Contributed by
wordpoet
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Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 02:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I saw the flowers on the hill, blowing to and fro,
While memories of you came back and dreams I used to know.
I wanted life with you to be a fantasy embraced,
Instead I stand here all alone, my destiny erased.
In silence life has passed me by, I never let you know,
My feelings hidden by my pride has brought me to this woe.
I could have had it all with you, sweet love to call my own,
If for but the briefest moment, my feelings wouldve shown.
But now your name is carved in stone, no sunlight on your face,
And of all the people left behind, it seems Ive lost my place.
If only I could change the past, keeps running through my mind,
Id give you all the love I had and show you how you shined.
If youve ever felt this way when someone passed you by,
And every time you think of them, your heart lets out a cry,
Then take this moment in your life to tell them that you care,
Or else one day you may find out that theyre no longer there.
By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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Re: Flowers On The Hill
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 02:13:42 AM AEST
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| wow! i know exactly what you feel. never could put it into words...thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Flowers On The Hill
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 03:08:53 AM AEST
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| Oh Doug ... this is a wonderful poem ... I knew as soon as I started reading, that it would touch a nerve. Always you write with such perfect rhyme and rhythm and your message is powerful. ... Great write ... Jan |
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Re: Flowers On The Hill
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by riverofwords on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 08:44:04 AM AEST
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awesome peom ..well done very powerful
great write
peace be yuor journey
Terry |
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Re: Flowers On The Hill
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 09:52:54 AM AEST
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| DOUG,VERY WELL DONE ON THIS SAD BUT WELL WRITTEN,GREAT ONE,CHRISTINA |
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Re: Flowers On The Hill
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 01:15:01 PM AEST
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Oh geez...I think you may have just put enough fear in me to force me to say how I feel, lol...funny, I just submitted a poem I wrote about not being able to put my feelings into words! Thanks for the gentle push, I needed it. :)
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: Flowers On The Hill
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by Lia on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 03:06:35 PM AEST
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| You are so good at reaching right into someone and turning their emotions into a tornado. I love this...I have been in this situation a time or two. And it is so important to always let people know how you feel about them. |
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Re: Flowers On The Hill
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by ginsdance on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 10:20:51 PM AEST
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I followed up on that bit of advice before you posted it... psychic I tell you... and now I'm happy for the first time in ages... engaged even!!!! Anyways, your poems are as great as ever! Keep it up! Sorry I haven't posted in awhile, but I'll try to catch up!
Ginnie |
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