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In Pace Requescat
Contributed by
lifeslittleangel
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Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 01:27:11 PM in AEST
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Please cut these strings that are holding me still
They make only moves that are matching your will
You tear me over here, when I want to be there
When I want to look away, you force me to stare
You tell them I am happy when I want to be mad
You tell them I am guilty when I wish to be glad
The pain of your movements are forever untrue
You'll never know me till you learn to construe
My intricate view known, not by my foe
Especially you and your perpetual throe
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2006-11-21 13:27:11]
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Re: In Pace Requescat
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by annoiosa on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 01:40:59 PM AEST
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| I really liked this one...I just wrote one yesterday called You Don't Own Me that this reminded me of...of course mine's not as well written! |
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Re: In Pace Requescat
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by spiritwind on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 01:56:38 PM AEST
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Written with great conviction.
Hold fast to that be your own person always.
SW |
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Re: In Pace Requescat
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by Clarity_Rising on
Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 01:46:23 PM AEST
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| You write as if you are being controlled by a puppeteer. Very interesting write and great work! |
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