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Wait below Waves
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 03:23:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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i'm met my decision
on a road of no dreams
the sky's a bruised vision
if you know what it means
i love you my sorrow
i've decided "i do"
will you marry tomorrow
my ill point of view
__________
i have my addictions
and I hide them from God
she has her predictions
that i'll someday be gone
but i swallow and save
my pride to the grave.
__________
i've met the man waiting
in the stairway below
he needs not keep baiting
cause my future i know
i wait below waves
for the sun to set soon
so i can't feel the days
become one tired tune
dw
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Re: Wait below Waves
(User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 09:59:16 PM AEST
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DW~
This is an addiction that I hope you overcome my friend. Sure it numbs the pain and our troubles go away for a little while, but sadly after the high reality sets in again.
I have the utmost faith in you dearest DW~
You are a very gifted artist and poet I'd hate to
see that all go to waste. I worry about you and I hope u are keeping well my dear friend.
A thought provoking write ascribed by the very gifted DW~ Keep up the awesome work.
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: Wait below Waves
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 10:24:14 PM AEST
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well done
excellent flow.
never give up
and
fall into the pits. |
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