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Dreamland
Contributed by
blindchoice
on
Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 03:07:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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trees dot the horizon
as i look out onto the river
hanggliders and moterboats
pass me by
the water is calm
as i watch the slowly setting sun
and soft music
plays in the background
the wind gently blowing my hair
as i look to the sky
the bitter-sweet taste of alchoal
lingering on the tip of my tounge
i write a note
saying goodbye
and jump into
the icy cool water below
red clay walls crumble
tall buldings apper
and tiny lights blink
off in the distance
stars wink at me
from above
and my dreamland
slowly....melts....
away
Copyright ©
blindchoice
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2006-11-22 15:07:47]
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Re: Dreamland
(User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on
Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 05:39:44 PM AEST
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| Wow, it must be a, "Dreamland" if theres calm waters where there are motorboats passing...sorry, a pet peeve of my as I'm a huge water lover. Back to the point, I really enjoyed the imagery cast here. Good job! |
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