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Alone But Never Lonely
Contributed by
ButchCorpuz
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Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 09:44:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Im alone, but Im never lonely
As long as my heart and soul can see
That from a distance youre always there
From afar I feel this love we share
Im quiet, but Im never silent
As long as my heart is in torment
Of this distance between you and I
Such yearning I can never deny
I weep, but Im never in sorrow
As long as we both have tomorrow
Waiting for us to be together
Spending time far beyond forever
Im worn-out, but Im never weary
As long as youre right there, loving me
No matter how far we are apart
I know well always be close at heart
Im alone, but Im never lonely
As long as youre there waiting for me
To come back and show you all my ways
Of loving you the rest of my days
~ Butch Corpuz ~
~ Betrayer of Hope No More ~
21 November 2006
AU 2:42 AM
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Re: Alone But Never Lonely
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by Perodyn on
Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 10:23:38 PM AEST
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| fair enough, but all loved ones peoms that come from the heart are regular, theyre expected, there is too many of the same old such and such, theyre has to be something in theyre that pounces out , strikes you, and draws you into the feeling of your text, maybe truthfull , heartfealt, but untill theyres that inspiration, id class it as just another bland love song ... but im an amateur, dont listen to me ..lol |
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Re: Alone But Never Lonely
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by Soccerflyer27 on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 04:56:36 PM AEST
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| I disagree with Perodyn, (or whatever the name is). I believe this poem is beautiful and captures a lot of emotion that occurs in a "distance-challenged" love, if you know what I mean. You put the feeling of not being lonely when you're alone in good words, and that's what poetry is about. Putting feelings into good words. Thumbs up! |
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