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Car Crash
Contributed by
B-Yak
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Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 11:41:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I pass out.
Eyes open to a world of sorrow,
I am told to drive to her house.
They said I had enough time,
But I guess they were wrong.
I see her lifeless on the ground,
They say, "she's gone."
Pain, sadness, and heartache consume my scarred heart.
I kneel down, give her a breath,
A breath of pure agony.
She slips away, into the darkness.
I clench her tight,
I tell her I love her.
It goes dark,
I pass out,
My soul slips away with my love.
Copyright ©
B-Yak
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2006-11-24 11:41:05]
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Re: Car Crash
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by shelby on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 01:14:57 PM AEST
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Ouch! This is so painful and haunting to me.
Vivid emotion and images. If this is real I am so sorry for this pain.
my soul slips away with my love....
profound!
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Car Crash
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 09:47:37 AM AEST
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it's as if your pain is speaking to me through the few short words. wonderful imagery...or in this case - i guess not.
anyway, your an amazing writer...not kidding.
- Bethani - |
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